Writing yesterday flowed! Whoo-hoo! I don't know if it is any good, but I am supposed to "trust the process." I rewrote the scene where Jean shows Emma her rental space. According to my trusty advisor, the scene did not make sense as originally written...it was too vague. I was trying to drop some foreshadowing in the scene, but I guess I was too evasive so I was the only one who understood it! UGH. Anyway...here is an excerpt:
At first glance, the girl standing there had a striking resemblance to someone she once knew. But it took only a few seconds to notice the distinct differences and to remember the obvious impossibility of it being the same person.
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