I have been able to write these middle sections of the novel much easier than the beginning chapters. I guess it is because I know the ending, and I know the main events that need to take place. I just am having a hard time introducing the characters and knowing how much to disclose. In any case, here is a section from the latest chapter:
Sometimes Beth could not follow any of Karley’s one-sided conversations, and other conversations seemed to be in slow motion, when Karley seemed incapable of upholding much of
a conversation at all. At those times, Karley’s personality was flat, and Beth would wait for the spike of the flatline, the way doctors watch the monitor for signs of activity, for life to
spark again and the line to regain normalcy.
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