I have actually been writing on my yellow legal pads; I just have not had the time to put type it up or post it. After I read As I Lay Here Dying, I read The Sun Also Rises. Both being classics, I was sort of in that "mode" when BAM! Out of nowhere comes this totally horrible book, In the Cut. Wow...talk about vulgar, sexually explicit, and downright disgusting!!!! Don't read it! So, now I am back to my writing. My packet is due this coming Monday...so I am looking forward to hearing what my advisor has to say this time. Here is a short excerpt from this today's writing:
Karley walked to the counter to order, and Keith watched her fluid movements – the way she crossed one foot over the other and balanced it on her toes, the way she tilted her head slightly to the right when she spoke to the employee, the way she clutched her small purse and held it in the crevice between her body and the counter.
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