April 5, 2012

I received the feedback from my last packet...WHOO-HOO! The feedback was very positive! My advisor said things like, "lovely," a scene was "terrifically drawn," there are "moments of quiet beauty," and "this is imaginative writing." WOW...finally something to go on here. Hope I can keep it up! So, I had not written much over the past week because I was working on my reading and critical writing, but last night I literally climbed out of bed because the words were pouring out of me. I wrote a chapter where Emma has another dream about Karley. Here is a small glimpse:

I wonder how long he will wait before he gives in. Before his hands abandon the safety of exposed skin and explore the secret crevices of my innocence. Before he peels away the layer of cloak that covers my virginity. I wonder how long I will wait for him to stop waiting.