I have completed 16 of my 20 page requirement to send in my packet. I am so anxious to find out what my advisor has to say about my writing. So many changes have occurred in terms of my craft, so it will be interesting to get his feedback. Today, I worked on revision a bit. I also decided that I wish I could write as fast as my mind thinks. I have so many scenes in my head, but writing them out takes time. Here is my favorite part from today's writing/revising:
Jean turned from Emma, but it wasn’t until she had closed the door behind her and commenced her descent down the stairs that she relinquished her façade of composure. Tears spilled from her eyes as her dam of resistance crumbled.
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